|Reviews for Faded|
| Cheerfulbunny 11/10/12 . chapter 1
If this is a one-shot, it looks like a extremely rushed one.
I recommend a spell/grammar check.
The different paragraphs: Put another space in between them. Like:
BLAHBLAHBLAH. End Paragraph.
Start new paragraph. BLAHBLAHBLAH...
It's too compact, and it makes it hard to read. I do like the storyline, although I was bothered by the spelling.
| Guest 10/26/12 . chapter 1
AT LAST! AFTER WEEKS OF WAITING SOMEONE WRITES A NEW STORY! this story is extremely impressive, I like how you convey all these different ideas in 250 words. Wow, just wow. Please continue writing it was truly a pleasure to read.