| Reviews for Le passé innatendue |
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shymlook 1/3/13 . chapter 1 bien sofinou |
Nobody 12/29/12 . chapter 3 Bien la petite intrigue Mélinda n'est pas fille unique! |
zaz11496 11/22/12 . chapter 5j t'aime beaucoup! qu'est ce qui s'passe avec melinda? est ce que Aiden va t'etre dans ce serie? |
lola56100 11/8/12 . chapter 1Ouai bonne idée je vais l'ecrire en français |
kailey12 11/7/12 . chapter 3Ok I feel like this could be a really good story if you just wrote it in your own language. The way you are writing it is really confusing. It seems like a great idea for a story but it is too hard to understand so it kind of kills the story. I am not trying to be mean I am just telling you truthfully that if you write it in your language that it might make more sense to those who can speak your language cause this english version makes little to no sense. |