I like holly. The characters really come to life. Oooh you should write a waterloo road story.

Aw glad holly understood where her mum was coming from, and that she did eventrually go and see her

Feel really sorry for what happened to her dad, and no holly your mum would miss you terribly if you died her life would become harder not easier.

Hope the bully's stop!
Great update, update again soon !
Xxx

I think that the ending is really good :P In fact the whole chapter was rather fantastic :) update when you have the time :D xx

Heya! (decided to read it today)
Jac needs to come around and face reality. If Holly needs her then she should be there.
She needs to break her icy exterior.
Can't wait to see where you take this :D
Abbey x x

Aww feel sorry for holly, she believes her mum hates her, but she just didn't want to look at her with all the machines keeping her alive :(
Hope holly can understand where her mum is comming from update soon ! xx

Omg how have I not found this ?! Thanks for telling me about it! Really good please update hope holly will be ok x

Update soon! x

Ooh, I like it, it's really interesting! Would love to see more ;) xx

I like it! Will be interesting to see where you take this. Do continue x

Oh I like it! It's an interesting side to Jac! Can't wait to read more! :) xxxxxx

Liked it Jac and a teenager daugter if she is anything like Jac wow I can't begin to imagine xx