Hope you get your space monkey problems sorted out. There are still stories you need to write for me, and if you think you aren't writing for me then my secret plan to distantly hypnotize all of the best writers out there is finally starting to work.

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Well, carry on

It's good to see Jayne getting along with the "little psycho." To be expected I suppose, given their common interests.

He's the steel, she's the flint...get busy! PLEASE

Goodness, I do love them all.

I'm glad I discovered this story, it seems really good! I'll be awaiting the next chapter.

great chapter! I like that Inara made coffee for Mal and that Mal cottoned on early about the fight.

It's great to have you back, I do hate those space monkeys!

I really love this, you have characterised them so well!

That was like some weird, awesome, mother-daughter arse-kicking team.

Loved it can't wait for the romance

lesson: don't mess with the women of Serenity.

Nice to see you back! This is a great chapter! Especially the Mal/Inara drunken fluff...although I see no good coming from those two getting drunk together...unless they're finally honest with each other!

Aw, yes. Everything I hoped for and more :P

Ive never read any fanfic before. Thought this was great! Can't wait for the ending.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Loved the Zoe river moment

I have no intelligent or amazing literary insight to divulge, I just freakin' love this story.