Dammit woman you need to update this story for the love of God. But seriously I would really appreciate it if you found it in your heart to continue it. I mean I've loved every single TLW story that you've wrote, hell I read them all as they came out along with all your other stories that you've done, literally. I've actually read your stories more than once, I remember when you started this story because it wasn't long after that that I kinda lost touch with everything Internet and missed out on quite a bit. But I've been able to make a comeback and I've actually reread most of your early works and I'm working my way up. Now I was disappointed to see that History of Takeo and TWABH:Dark Prince were put on hold especially seeing as how there prequels are both some of my favorites. I don't maybe I'm just rambling but I really hope that you'll be able to find a way to continue on with this story and see it through to completion.

Sincerley your faithful reader,
James a.k.a Psychoholic

I'm still reading! >.< I just had a lot of catching up to do and finally caught up! I still love this series as much as I did when I first started reading it, and you're not just writing it for yourself!

That aside, love the chapter. ^^

You asked if anyone was reading this. Well I'm reading it. It's quite good and I hope you continue it.Looking foward to many more updates.

nice story, i love it! keep it up!

Woot! Go Gohan and Videl ^_^! So are they going to be married even though they are dead and in the afterlife? And I'm sure dead people can't have children, so when does Pan come? Great chapter! And you did a wonderful job on the scene between Gohan and Videl! And may I say, I positively love Goku's character in your fic; it adds so much more depth to him! I also like how you potrayed Hercule in this chapter. Cannot wait for the next one, ChibiChibi^_^! And the final battle! But I'm guessing that's a long ways off^_- All the better^_^! Please hurry with the next chapter!

*Squeal!* ChibiChibi! How how how!? How did Gohan get back to Earth? The Kaio-shin? But why would he do that... Hm... Much intrigued! Poor Jenny; balance between two parts of oneself is a difficult thing to achieve, even harder to keep. I hope you post the other part of this chapter soon^_^ And that bit about Goku and Chichi in the past; that was so sweet!

Very curious indeed! I'm quite intrigued, ChibiChibi^^ This chapter was great^_^ The characters were really well written (as always^_-) in their reactions to the bits of trama. And yay for Half-Bloods! And a little heart-wrenching too! When the part about social services taking her away came up, I started panicking! But I understand where Jenny's coming from in the classroom scene; I wouldn't be able to keep my mouth shut in a situation like that either, but that's just me^_^'' And that preview! When does that come into play? Where'd the whole sword thing suddenly come from!? Swords are wonderful, aren't they^_^

Nice chapter.

Yay! I loved it! Brings back so many great memories *wipes tear* Lots of fun^_^! I absolutly love when you take bits from cannon! Very well written! And yay! You say you've got four chapters already written out! WHen are those going to be posted? Soon? Or do we have to wait a chapter or two showing Jenny going to school and whatnot? Soon I hope^_^ Don't wait too long for the next update!

^_^! Fabtabulous chapter, ChibiChibi! I loved it! And just picturing the Kais after Goten and Trunks' pranks! Woo^_^ Hey, how long will Vegeta's hair stay like that? And I loved how you let Vegeta have a sense of humor about the whole prank; is Jenny's hair going to be dyed red for awhile too? And yay! Gohan and Videl are finally together! Yay for full moons! And I can't wait to go read your revision of chapter 17 of the original The Lost Warrior! As always, please hurry with the next chapter of this! I can't wait!

ChibiChibi! Come on! It's been months! We need another chapter! We're dying here! Please!

Welcome back ChibiChibi! It's been awhile! This was another great chapter. Mrs. Briefs had a good idea to give Jenny a diary; they are useful things when one needs to vent things he or she wouldn't tell others. Also, I absolutly loved this description of the diary: "If you need someone to listen but have no one to talk to.” And yay for Vegeta feelings! That was really sweet how he promised Kakarotto he'd lok after Jenny^_^ He loves her! And I loved the comment about Trunks falling right through when he tried to ride the Kintoun^_^ Also, yay! You explained why Jenny is blonde haired and blue eyed in this dimension; that's one question down^_- So what about the birthday one^_-V Anyway, as always this was a great chapter, as I said, and I sincerely hope you don't take so long with the next one!

*smiles* A bit sad, but definitely a wonderful chapter. And I really loved their presents!

Danke!

Marek

Woo! Prophecy! I *love* a good prophecy! Wonder how strange it is going to be for the other girl when Jenny shows up one day^_^ And yay! Training finallu gets to start! Ok, I've still got a question about the whole birthday thing. I understand why, in the original story, Jenny's birthday was in the summer because she had to merge with a six month old fetus; but then why was Goten's birthday still the same as that Jenny? This was another wonderful chapter as we've all come to expect from the greatness that is ChibiChibi^_^V As always, please hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait!

Wow... Thanks for a great chapter again! I wonder whether Jenny will leave this world now. And how will she do this? Although I'm leaning towards the idea that Bulma might have some kind o an experimental machine there. Somehow I also get the feeling that this time Vegeta will go with her, although I might be wrong and she might just sheak away. Whatever will happen, I'll let you surprise me. Thanks for writing this!

Marek