|Reviews for Impact|
| Guest 9/6/02 . chapter 5
Your story was definetly entertaining, however you writing was very uncharacteristic of the real show and the people portrayed in it. The end was a good idea for why Clark and Lex become enemies, but Calrk killing Lana? That is really sad because I really want them to end up together.
If there is any advise i could give, it merely be PROOF READ! There were quite a few spelling mistakes and gramatical errors. Maybe it would help to write the story on a word processor (or anything with spell check) first. Good job and good luck on the future.
| AngiePJBeliever 8/23/02 . chapter 4
Oh dear, this is getting interesting. Write more, please :D
| Whisper 8/23/02 . chapter 4
Hey this story is really great! I'm glad someone else noticed how Lex always seemed to be there for Lana. I always thought he had a little something for her! Keep up the good work and continue writing, the suspense is killing me! Who hit her? Finally, I hope you don't think I'm rude but I noticed all these spelling errors and I don't know if you are gonna go back and change them but here they are:
feal-feel to-too('I love you to..)should be too
speeked-speaked(should actually be spoke)
Some mistakes appeared more than once, so check the chapters. Sorry to take up so much room, you can delete this review if you want.
| Unknown 8/15/02 . chapter 3
Pleeease update this story
| AngiePJBeliever 8/6/02 . chapter 3
OMG! MUST WRITE MORE! please...hehe. ;) Can't wait for next part!
| Selsha 8/5/02 . chapter 2
OmG! MORE MORE MORE MORE! CoMe On We NeEd MoRe!
| TKDgrl 7/29/02 . chapter 2
| Scribbled Musings 7/21/02 . chapter 2
Huge Lex/Lana shipper here! Great story! Please right more since Lex/Lana fics are rarities. :)
| AF22 7/21/02 . chapter 2
Omg! Please tell me you're going to write more? This fic is amazing! I love it so much! ***very excited Angie*** Please! continue! Huge L/L fan over here :D