Your story was definetly entertaining, however you writing was very uncharacteristic of the real show and the people portrayed in it. The end was a good idea for why Clark and Lex become enemies, but Calrk killing Lana? That is really sad because I really want them to end up together.

If there is any advise i could give, it merely be PROOF READ! There were quite a few spelling mistakes and gramatical errors. Maybe it would help to write the story on a word processor (or anything with spell check) first. Good job and good luck on the future.

Oh dear, this is getting interesting. Write more, please :D

Hey this story is really great! I'm glad someone else noticed how Lex always seemed to be there for Lana. I always thought he had a little something for her! Keep up the good work and continue writing, the suspense is killing me! Who hit her? Finally, I hope you don't think I'm rude but I noticed all these spelling errors and I don't know if you are gonna go back and change them but here they are:

Ch 1

worm-warm collage-college

nodest-noticed reliving-relieving

Ch 2

god-good red-read

sowed-showed pist-pissed

time-times mussel-muscle

Ch 3

painfull-painful ones-once

to-too somthing-something

singel-single practise-practice

gripp-grip speach-speech

se-see cuddeling-cuddleing

feal-feel to-too('I love you to..)should be too

speeked-speaked(should actually be spoke)

Ch 4

pronlems-problems seerving-serving

bare-bear interupted-interrupted

shure-sure dissepeard-disappeared

pregnantsy-pregnancy suspisious-suspicious

pragnant-pregnant starring-staring

to-too wawing-waving

collage-college worm-warm

phatetic-pathetic

toilett-toilet

sience-since

helo-hello

Some mistakes appeared more than once, so check the chapters. Sorry to take up so much room, you can delete this review if you want.

Pleeease update this story

OMG! MUST WRITE MORE! please...hehe. ;) Can't wait for next part!

OmG! MORE MORE MORE MORE! CoMe On We NeEd MoRe!

MORE!

Huge Lex/Lana shipper here! Great story! Please right more since Lex/Lana fics are rarities. :)

Omg! Please tell me you're going to write more? This fic is amazing! I love it so much! ***very excited Angie*** Please! continue! Huge L/L fan over here :D