This is 1 of my favorite episodes, always thought it needed a little something to make it better

I liked your version of the story. Humanizing Clark & making him dependent on Lois is a novel way to appreciate their relationship.

love it

Ooh. Interesting. I liked the twist on this. Also, I think it could be a really interesting twist if you took this idea of Lois wanting to make them pay and ran with it... although I know that would definitely be more out of character for her. But still. Another great little one-shot. :)