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| danagabrielle 2004-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseok... I see you never updated that story in 2 years so I guess I should cry now. :( It was really good. I'm sad now. Did you ever write the sequel? If so, just e-mail me ok? my pen name is Annick |
| nim_mag 2004-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi! Since I couldn´t figure out WHY the´re fightig it´s hard to answer your questions. It happened before Rory had left with Emily to the trip to Europe, or just a little time after her departure, right? Did it involve Dean? Jess? Relationships in general? T h e i r realtaionship? Anyways, Lorelai went too far this time. He´s dating a woman- to make her jealous? To proof her anythin´? Ok, I´d say she should follow him because it was her fault and she wants to know why. But then, he doesn´t want to speak to her right now (as he said), so I guess he´s heading for his secret place, going fishing or something. Which means she runs home and has a good cry (poor Rory). To your question what should happen next... Well- Claire seems to be nice but I would appreciate it if you simply let her...vanish. Not abruptly, of course, but soon enough. Thank you for asking. Bye, mag Oh, sorry, I forgot the main review: I love your story. It makes me wonder what you´re going to make out of this first chapter. Which indicates that I´m waiting for your second one! |
| sweetangel251 2002-08-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is so well written and I hope you add more to it because it's great! I don't know what she should do... I'm interested to see your take on things... |
| Lady Artemis of KY 2002-07-26 ch 1, | abusePlease continue! Please? **sniff, sniff?** And it'd be much easier to read if you made new paragraph's everytime someone talked. ^_^ Please continue! |
| Lauren9 2002-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great start and I'm eager to read chapter 2! I'm going to make a suggestion, but PLEASE don't take it the wrong way. I'm loving the first chapter of the story, but the way it was formatted was really ** the eyes. Could you maybe add a few more paragraph breaks or something? I kept getting lost and reading the last sentence over and over again... Again, I love it! Keep up the great work! :) |
| Golden Child1 2002-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Please continue! |