Your really sick you no that?

That was very disturbing. Maybe its just me.. but I thought it was funny when Mavis tortured Johnny, but ya after a few moments I was like...wait a minute what just happened. But good attempt with drac Mavis pairing

I... actually really like the pairing. But I can't imagine Mavis as a malevolent person, so the prospect of her torturing Jonathan was a huge turn off to me... Maayybe her father, for his daughter's sake. But that's just my feeling on the issue.

This story is perfect. It has incest(which I love) and bloodlust. Couldn't have read a better story.

I love your dark take on this story! Absolutely enthralling!
You really used the whole Vampire bloodlust thing to enhance the story.
Happy writing!

A rather dark and particularly disturbing fic. Yet it was enjoyable. Still creeped out by the whole father/daughter thing.

I like the writing although a father and daughter romance is kinda gross, no offense i like you're writing style but father and daughter as a romance eh not my type of thing.

This should be rated m

i beg you WRONG!JUST WRONG!,but nice details

I'm not really accustomed to incest, but I have to say this is good. Fun to read, too. They're both so loving and adorably cruel. :D The bloodfight made it - I d'awwed out loud and I can honestly say it's the best situation ever to d'aww at.

0.0 bit surprising there but again I loved it.

tienes problemas enserio muchos problemas

I really wouldv been Alot more comfartable if it was jonathan,but Dracula,,, TOOOO far man tooo far

Cool. Slightly disturbing

Iiiinteresting and a bit weird, but not bad. :D
(Hmm, M ration wouldn't be better than the current T?)