Very nice! Concise and to-the-point without making it awkwardly short.
(Glad to see another author writing for Sherwood Pictures too!)
Ariel_of_Narnia

YAY, someone else wrote for "Courageous!" So thrilled to see this story here! A very good piece you've written; I've wondered if maybe Dylan hadn't felt this way. I'd love to see you write more for "Courageous."

I don't know these characters. I don't know the back-story. I don't know the circumstances surrounding the loss they are coping with. However, I DO know that this is a beautifully written piece, a very human, universal, and accessible presentation of a concept which is difficult for many, and agonizing for all at one time or another. I DO know that, once again, you have done a stunning job of captivating me, and pulling me inside the events on the page. Finally, I DO know that though short, this seems to be just the right length for what the subjects are discussing. Any shorter, and the audience would fail to be engaged, any longer and it would become sermonizing, rather than narrative. Well done, as ever. Well done.