That was good. I did like it though there was a few grammar mistakes. But other then that it was good, though I wished you would have included Dilla(?) she was a important character in Eona. Though... O_O THANK YOU! You made me think of something Thank you!
Yuki-neechan out!
(Btw I was too lazy to log in :I)

Oh man, soooo good! :)

lol ur hot thays ll i care about screw the at u.

I feel your pain I despised the ending! It's like she just gave up writing it! Anyway I love this a few grammar errors but other wise pretty good and I love your other eon story do keep writing!