This is really interesting! I love it. Are you planning to finish it? I hope you will, can't wait 'till the continuation. I think you've caught the characters very well :)

This is really interesting. I love it!
Are you planning to finish it? I hope you will, can't wait 'till the the nest chapter. I think the way you've caught the characters is brilliant. :D

Now, if you're not going to finish it i wonder if I may have the honor to finish it for you?

I'm not kidding, this story made me type "A goofy movie online free" and I'm currently watching it in another tab. WOW, I absolutely love this. Gwash, it's so well written and...and AWESOME. I really, really love this.

That was such an interesting story. I'd love to read more, this is probably my first Bobby-centered story to read.

Hello! XxXHourofTwilightXxX here!

Great story so far! Please continue! XxX

.. Still trying to understand the validity of Max x Bobby despite the fact that it's one of the more prevalent crack pairings out there.. And I can see where this is going with the New Age "do what feels good to/for you" spiel and the latent hatred towards (Christian) religious views as well. I don't mean to be rude, but that's what I'm reading here. I do like how you captured Bobby's speech impediment and you were able to tap into his possible drug using (personally I just think he's a fresh dude that usually smokes cigarrettes and the occasional rolled-up green)-As for the brief description of his old man being abusive and whatnot; I just can't see it o,o;;; But this is your story after all, so you can take my review with a grain of salt. ; Just don't make the plot too predictable...