really cool chapter i don't get why he owes a favor though, but other then that i loved it!

finally its hear, yay...ookay thats all I got keep it up and... yeah thats really it, derp

Seems like you cut it off for space...

please tell me your not done

Nice, extremely good made me go through everything from hapinness, sadness, anger, frustration... etc keep it up

Sucks what happened to your computer. But I'm glad your back!

Keep on writing I'm loving the story bro!

sorry about your computer but really cool i'm gald sadie is back

NO I'M MAD IT'S DONE NO DUDE OR DUDET DON'T END THINGS LIKE THAT MAN pardon my french WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN TO ROXA WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN BETWEEN HUTCH,SADIE, AND CLAW MAN WHAT THE HELL DON'T END THINGS LIKE THAT I MEAN IF YOUR THINKING OF STUFF JUST MAKE A SEQULQ DUDE/DUDET
my name is not really that it's my email but it says save at the bottem and i have no idea what that means but if you can like tell me what that means i will click it thanks! :P sorry the thing did not finsh it's

omg so many old names but i never knew roxas was kicke out OMG I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN I'M DIING OF WONER AND EXCIMENT!

this one is really great an i love the ending! saide is back yay i woonder how this will effect claw if hutch an saide meet again!

the top made me cry only but it probley was because i just cam from the red moon one but other then that it was really good and i really like the new names the only nme i would change is roxa it's more of a girls name but i might be saying it wrong i on't know it's up to you :P

wow i have no idea mabye it should be garth's sister or if you want to change the story a little bit garth could have a younger sis named lilly shes just like lilly but look different.

this one is really sad but it somewhat reminds me of alpha and omega when kate and humphery were stuck betwin the 3 bears and the cliff but this part really made me cry for real but i really want to read on but like i said is this was meant for kids i would really change some stuff

ok i have one ? is this meant for kids? cause if it is you might want to change some stuff but it's great so far!

i think it's alot better then the first one it's less violnt and inoproat for kids and it's really funny trust me you will be hearing lots of commets from me miss/mister oh i think that it's good to her thoughts from a kid like me i can't wait to read more!