haha very funny and entertaning i enjoyed this make adventure

well...trying to escape and blacking out in the process...a cliffhanger...(hmm...slight suggestions of preciousmetal I see) and the plot thickens...very good sensual writing!

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This seems like a really...interesting fic...mysterious and chilly...the general innocence of Pokemon is practically absent...nice...theft (material and identity), and who knows wut other crimes will come?

Make is a OC (pronounced Maa-ke)