Awww

WOW! If only it would have been that boring of a story! Then many more readers would have ended up reading the story as well! NOT! I am so glad that it had ended the way that it had!

Even if Susie had seen him digging the hideout, it seems a little unrealistic that her first thought would be, "Oh, he must be digging it to hide a body in."

I wish that all stories had happy endings, but unfortunately, that's not reality.

For what this is, it's very good. I wish that it could have been a little longer, but now I'm being nitpicky.

That was fucking magical. Your like Shakespeare

its a good story and in today's time that would have happened but this was in the 1970s where you didn't think a killer lived next door people were more trusting then now you don't go off with someone you don't know you might if the person is a woman or they go to your school and you have classes or are in a club with them but a old man mr. Harvey age and acted like him you get creep out and want to get as far away from him as possiblie

True true. Girls should be more cautious when talking to strangers.

this could be great... if it wasn't so rushed.