|Reviews for The fire Within|
| MarauderRose19136 4/7/13 . chapter 4
Are you going to update?
| lucywolfblood 11/5/12 . chapter 1
I don't have time to give much of a review but I really enjoyed it as a piece of fan fiction and will feature it as a link on my twitter page - so other Wolfblood fans can read it !
| Abby0512x 11/2/12 . chapter 2
You've linked this with Eragon haven't you? I know, cuz I've read the books and watched the movie.
| Kerry Fred 11/2/12 . chapter 2
oh heather i know you so well! i see what you done there and i know where this is from... ERAGON! ;)
| Guest 11/1/12 . chapter 1
| Abby0512x 10/29/12 . chapter 1
This was awesome! You might want to sort out your punctuation. You need paragraphs after every speech and capital letters for names.
| RainWater 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Hi. I really like your story and hope you continue but I noticed a couple of things that could help the next chapter, like using caps on names, so maddy, would be Maddy.
And saying alpha and female sorta makes it look like Maddy's dad is top wolf, when their both top of the pack, alpha male and alpha female.
I hope I don't come across mean and horrible, your story looks like it could be brilliant : ).
Hope you update soon : D.
| EmrysGleek 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Please continue xx
| Binnie-Bunny 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Love it please continue :)