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   Spirit9871 2/22/13 . chapter 12Fuck yes. Well worth the wait. If I were to choose my favorite part of the chapter, it'll be the part where the A.T.P. agent threw his grenade into the MAG's shotgun and said: "Suck on that bitch." Very epic indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter, and good work. :) Spirit9871 |
| Spirit9871 12/27/12 . chapter 11 Not bad! I was actually a bit worried when you told me that you had Writer's Block since it could mean that this chapter would be below average in quality, but this is pretty impressive! There are grammar mistakes here and there though along with some awkwardly worded sentences, but I can clearly see what you're trying to say. Good work overall, and can't wait for the next chapter! Spirit |
| Spirit9871 11/30/12 . chapter 9 Dang...I just have to comment here... The rooms were all so creative in the own makings, and made me literally want to see more. In fact, I actually winced when the chapter ended just because of how epic it was. By far, this is the best chapter yet. Still some errors, but it is understandable. I really hope you update soon! |
| Spirit9871 11/18/12 . chapter 5 Awesome! Pretty good way to carry on! Plus, your update speed was incredible. Great job! Wish to see more soon! |
| Spirit9871 11/18/12 . chapter 4 A few errors here and there relating to mixing up words, but I still loved it! Nice work on this chapter as well, so keep it up! Also, congratulations! You have the second longest Madness Combat Fanfiction on this site XD! The cliffhanger was still awesome, plus the character interaction is a good factor you added in too! Can't wait for Chapter 5! Spirit |
| Spirit9871 11/12/12 . chapter 3 Wow! I'm impressed! I didn't think you would be able to pass that cliffhanger on Chapter 2! Great job! Update soon! |
| Spirit9871 10/30/12 . chapter 2 Awesome chapter! A mysterious building the Auditor never heard of? It actually creeps me out, but at the same time, it's pretty exciting! Update soon! |
| Sacrom574 10/29/12 . chapter 1 Very well written, for the most part. There is space to improve upon, as in grammar. One or two times throughout the story a word was used twice in a sentence, makes it look a bit awkward. That's about everything I have to say. Awaiting the next chapter with anticipation, George. P.S. And as always, have a nice day. |
| Spirit9871 10/28/12 . chapter 1 That was a pretty good first chapter! I like the suspense you put in for all of us already in the beginning! Update soon! |
