|Reviews for one for all and things like that|
| Quen Galad 11/25/12 . chapter 1
This is an excellent short story.
I loved the details on thief work - this is important and interesting stuff that is always left out for some reason. I also liked how Alora's carefree attitude shined through the whole story. The ending was strangely melancholic, bittersweet with a prevalence of "bitter" but suited the whole premise very well.
If I were to criticize anything, it would be the Anishai encounter, which was rather pointless from the narrative point of view. Some parts seemed a bit rushed, too, I could feel they were being skipped over in a rush to more interesting parts.
But all in all, it's a very good, cozy story that captures the "reality" of rogue life very well and it transported me right into the middle of it. Well done.
| Blue-Inked Frost 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Glad you posted this here! This was a fun fic. :) I remember commenting on this at Yuletide, and I still like the story a lot.