awwww, poor Zuko! Katara why didnt you just kiss him then! loved the "you're gunna kiss every guy you meet! girls too; just in case!" from Zuko.
Awaiting more Spirit World drama/ Zutara probs
Long Live Zutara!

I liked both arcs here, especially the last one. I hope the next chapter has Katara kissing girls. You know, just in case. ;) -K

This chapter was beautifully written; no need for smut :)

ooh. kissing in the rain . this was pretty wet ;)
It all begins to fall together in a slow, groggy ascent as they hold onto each other for support. I am of two minds of this sentense. I think I both like the contradiction of falling ascent, but it also confused me.

the way his eyes curve like the inside of a glass ball, this one only confused me. like the inside of a ball? but eyes are like balls, and they curve normally, like the outside of a ball...dont they? or do you mean the reflexion of an iris? that kind of looks inverted sometimes.

Awesome chapter. Keep writing you hear? :)

I need the next installment like a burning! This was just too good. Zuko's last line was PERFECT!

excuse me while i go scream into the nearest pillow

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS SACRED PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT PART OF ATONEMENT PLEASE I CAN'T HANDLE THIS ANY LONGER

This was great. Zuko's final line was hilarious, as was his thinking about telling Katara to take a long walk off a short cliff. Everyone was wonderfully in character here. I'm wondering how Katara's going to find her soul mate though, especially with Zuko still dead! Update soon! :))

-Kitty

:p lol thats a lot of kissing... hmmm maybe I should start at the beginnin, cause now im confused!

THAT LAST LINE! OMG, that was awesome.

This whole thing was awesome. I can so see Katara trying to make conversation, Zuko telling her to shut up, and Katara blowing up on him. I can't wait for the next installment. :D

Zuko's last line made me laugh so hard. So like him.

NO KATARA WHY DIDN'T YOU KISS HIM FOR GOOD LUCK OR A FAREWELL! EVWRYTHING WOULD HAVE BEEN OKAY. NOW YOU'RE SEPARATED. BOO.

Loved Zuko in this. And I love this arc. Can't wait to see how Katara's going to get Zuko out of this mess. I mean we all know he's her soul mate! :P Update soon!

Oh Zuko:\
Update soon!:P

Yay, you updated! I love that first paragraph. I can just see Zuko thinking something like that, haha.

/The girl is actual quiet for once/

'actually'

/So when is seems as though her chattering and not so subtle attempts at prodding him aren't going to let up any time soon, he bluntly tells her to shut up. Needless to say, she loses it./

LOLOLOLOL! I love this. It just cracks me up every time. Oh, but that 'is' should be 'it'.

Hehe, Zuko is losing it. I'm not really surprised he started laughing like that with Katara going off at him for telling her to shut up (since she killed him and all), and how she's still somehow inflicting pain on him. It is rather funny, in a 'omg, why me?' way, lol.

LOL! I love how Aang is all 'should give them some space, but this is awkward', Zuko is all "Look at me, damn you!', and Katara is just like "HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOU!" Ahh, you crack me up with your characterisations, and they're all so perfect.

Hahahahaha, oh you are so evil making Katara have to kiss her soulmate (especially since he was right there sitting next to her). How is she going to sort this out now?

awesome