This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing this and keep up the good work! :)

I wish this scene would have been in the movie at the end. I loved the ending as well as the movie, don't get me wrong. But I wish something more would have happened at the end where they all talked about their feelings like they did here. You did very good with this. Thank you for writing it.

That was very sweet, and realistic, too. It goes beyond the fairy-tale ending and tries to cover some of the actual problems they would have needed to talk over and deal with. I did notice that when Louis was talking to Evan, you put that he was a "wreak." I think it should be "wreck." But overall, very, very nice story! I liked it a lot. :)

Hi! I like your version of the end! It was beautiful!Thank you so much!

Such a sweet story. It made me tear up! I love it!

:D I really love August Rush fanfictions... I reckon there should be more of them to be honest. So yeah, I really liked this one :)

That was sweet.

I loved the interaction of all the characters. Lyla and Evan’s talk was sweet, Louis and Evan’s talk was realistic, and I appreciated that Lyla and Louis didn’t immediately sleep together, but instead talked about their relationship.