This deserves way more reviews! Your characters are just right and the back story fits so well it could easily be the real thing. Gah,so good there is not enough words to rant about its perfectness. Please continue soon, as your plot is so captivating I am on edge to find out what happens next. Please please update!
GraceSong

Our girl really needed a little flip out

Great update.

Great update. Hope they get Robert before he does anything.

I loved Delaney and Tim in bed together and getting caught... that was too cute

Aww,so sweet Tim and Delaney.

Loved Delaney using Tony's coat as a blanket that was so sweet.
Cute that Tim likes her

Loved this update. So glad she is on the mend and that the team is there for her.

Did I love that interrogation!

Great update. Bertram got exactly what he deserved.

So glad that she is going to be ok. Cannot wait for Gibbs to get to interrogation. Bertram is in for a whole lot of hurt.

Glad that she has her Tonog with her poor little angel. good name for her.
Can't wait for the interrogation, Gibbs is going to lay into Betram and Tony will finish with McGee and Ziva picking up the pieces

Nice save by Gibbs and the team, can't waith for Gibbs to get Bertram's ass...I don't expect anything left when he is done with him.
Loved Ziva shooting off the guys finger well done!

Thank God they got there in time. I cannot wait for Gibbs to get his hands on Bertram. That man is in for a whole lot of hurt. Go Gibbs!

she definetly has fight in her, that captain is a sleeze ball...