Love the dream sequences. Spectacular writing and characterization as usual.

Wow

The realism and chaotic current were very intense here

OMGS I love you! Your stories are amazing as ever

:O
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I can't express just how much I love everything you write, this fic being no exception. I love how you write Itachi and how you write Temari, and I love how you make two characters who would never interact have such a chemistry. This is wonderful and I can't wait to see how it ends.

Keep up the great work
Chibi

I really enjoyed this chapter. It's a bit depressing, but in a good way, you know? Still, I can't wait for you to once again entertain us with your excellent crackfics! They're still one of the best I've ever read, and I'm dying for more. :D

Lovely and beautifully written. Temari and Itachi has become one of my most favorite pairings because of you. :))

(Also, I'm not ashamed to say that I squealed with glee when I read that the last chapter of Hazards of Amity was coming up. I'll be waiting for that one!)

:D

Just reviewing to say (a) this is another amazing little fic, and (b) I'm so glad you're continuing to update all these stories (just read Sky Runs Red and though I'm not a zombie apocalypse fan myself, it's a great -if horrifying-exploration of the worst case scenario). Can't wait to read more!

I really enjoyed this chapter! Writing from Itachi's point of view makes him seem less cold and stoic because he is definitely more of an observer than conversationalist. I also really like the your use of the water dream to reflect his state of mind and some of the emotions Itachi might be feeling. Keep up the great work and looking forward to your next piece!

(I had to review for another chapter, since FFnet is a jerk)

It won't let me post a link. What a bastard. I'll just tell you what the period after the semicolon was supposed to be then. It was a picture of some cats cuddling with a duck in a basket.

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Maybe this will work?

I'm sorry to hear/read that life is kicking your butt, sweet thang. I hope these stories don't cause you stress on top of all that. I love reading your fics, they're just so damn good, but I want you to enjoy writing them too. For reals. o.o

This is how your chapter made me feel: .

There was some suspense, but it's still warm and fuzzy. 3

I think this was the best chapter so far. I love how you show everyone's humanity here-how real Temari and Itachi are, even if strained. The dream is haunting. Love how you end the chapter like you do, very powerful.

Have to say, looking forward to the next chappy of HoA. If you need a beta, feel free to knock on my door.

xoxoxo!

Eeeee, I look forward to these updates! I love the interactions between these two, you write them so well! I hope things clear up for you soon. :'D

NIce story!
Please update soon