Enjoyed. You picked a really painful episode and did a nice job sharing the internal thoughts.

There's no need for editing. This is the best written story on FF. Your two sentences, "It had been a confusing couple of weeks for her. From Danny being around and pressuring her, for, she now realized, that was what he was doing, to Martin's reactions from jealously, both his anger and sadness" clearly explains the issues between ME and LG. The ending kiss was perfect.

Excellent first story! My only criticism is it ended too soon!

Just go with the flow.
I'm silently singing "Isn't it a lovely day to be caught in the rain..."

I really think Martin has no idea about what is normal and what isn't. Good for Louisa to tell him.
I hope she can lure him out of the shell a bit more.
Danny - Danny who?

Nice job. I think you should promptly start working on your next Doc Martin story. I always like the idea of taking an episode and expanding beyond it, regardless of canon.

Good job for a first story. Very well done. Hope to see more from you.

Thankfully Martin did not take time to think...and he initiated the kiss. Good work RL. We do look forward to more from your hand.

Wow. He walked her to the vouch and sat down right next to her. Marvelous.

Good job.

A nice finish to the story. I hope you'll launch into a new story now :) Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for your work. You are an excellent writer and have a real feel for the characters. Please write more - even a continuation of this great beginning!

Quite out of character for the Doc, but a welcome change. Look forward to seeing how the story continues.

What a cliffhanger, you can't leave it there... looking froward to your next update.

I always thought it would have been very helpful if Louisa knew what his mother has done, but the show never offers such heart-to-heart.

You have written a very nice conversation between our heroes. Well done! If every chat could go as well for them.