| Reviews for Granado Espada: Shunraiki Kuronikuru (The Thunderspring Chronicles) |
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Innocent Desires 11/13/12 . chapter 4Lol, so apparently anonymous reviews take forever to show up, that's all. ok, good to know. Anyway, nice chapter so far I remember this raid, but it's been a long time since I've gone on it:P Monsters are too weak XD And that new skill for Celeste... lol! Interesting way to use that:P What does it do? |
Moon 11/8/12 . chapter 1 Just checking to see if my review has popped up or if it didn't pop up at all. |
Moon 11/8/12 . chapter 3 So, I'm going to guess everyone's stances: Lycis: Either Soul Guard or Hanging Guard, maybe one of the weaker stances. Vex: Punisher? Fye: Maybe one of the bracelet stances? You said energy formed there, so probably an elementalist stance. Athena: Flintlock Celeste: Cutlass Did I get anything right? XD The story is pretty interesting so far. Again, the dynamics between the characters is good. But you need to polish it a bit :P The description is good though:) |
Moon 11/8/12 . chapter 2 Seems interesting. It could probably do with a few tweaks, but you're very good with picturing the interaction here. |
Moon 11/8/12 . chapter 1 Hey vex, I'm guessing this is the story you've been working on:P It looks good so far! Still laughing over the Athena thing though XD |
Innocent Desires 11/9/12 . chapter 3So, going to guess each character's stance here: Lycis: Hanging Guard/Soul Guard Vex: Punisher? Celeste: Cutlass Athena: Flintlock Luth: Some elementalist stance, maybe? Nice job here, good descriptions:) Can't wait to see more |
Innocent Desires 11/9/12 . chapter 2Athena's cooking... is that from experience? Can't cook all that well myself, but it's edible. Or at least I think so. Anyway, the interaction between the characters is nice, you can get a really good feel for their personality this way. The description is good, too. However, it could probably do with a bit of polishing and editing here and there:) |
Innocent Desires 11/9/12 . chapter 1Do you have anonymous reviews turned off? Tried to review yesterday but I don't think it went through. Anyway, moon here:) This is an account I made with my friend a long time ago, I don't think she even uses it anymore. Nice job though, and the Athena thing is really funny:) |