wait, sorry we are in june

HOW COULD YOU?!
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
Let Jack live! Who is going to make us laugh now? And who is going to make us cry for him? And who is going to leave that beautiful frost on the grass and windows in winter? And who is going to make it snow?
Here in Spain never snows! But this winter did! A lot! We are in may and it stills snows in the mountains...but if you killed him... Now there is no snow... Sniff*
Whyyyyyy? Sobs*

By the way, your writing is amazing, keep doing it! Great job! ;)

its like 19 kids and counting except its 19,000 viewers and counting lol but awesome story

Awwwwwwww

Omg
So awesome!

:)

Did you get the crying part from the book "Insurgent"? It says the same thing in one of the chapters

what! why does the story say its complete?! it cant be you just killed him! even if he is dead it cant just end there, what will all the guardians be thinking? please please please

You're 13 and you have a busy life... why are you apologising for being busy with more important things? The story is good, you have readers who love reading your stuff and you have the talent to put your ideas into words... So what if you hit a patch of writers block? Its better to wait until inspiration hits you again and truly do the story justice than to force your plot on to paper and be disappointed in your work.

My advice is to talk it through with someone, bounce your ideas off another fan and see where the inspiration leads. If you're not happy with the direction the story is going in, Change It! You are the author, you have the creative licence to do whatever the hell you want with your story. I'm available via PM if you feel you'd like to brainstorm or re-inspire yourself, what have you got to lose?

I'm really enjoying the story so far - there are a few spelling mistakes and grammar issues but I have the same problem in my own writings so I'll let it slide :) - so I really dont want to see a potentially amazing story become an incomplete misery. If you've truly given up with it but don't have the heart to delete it or take it down, why don't you give it to someone else to complete? All these options are available and more, just don't give up hope ok?

If you need a chat to inspire, re-work the plot or just to vent, I'm availabe for all three just because I think you're a worthy writer and you have a lot of potential to be a big hit out there.

Looking forward to more chapters from you.

Regards
Zer0

Yeah, you basically got the Aussie slang right but I will say something about how you used the word 'galah' to describe something. A galah is a person who is being stupid, flighty or nonsensical. But anyway, very good story! Keep up the good work!

yay i love this

*mouth still a gape*
Dwaaaaa!? But! Did you! Just! But! Wha! Nea! Pa! Dwoooo my gwod!

Baww... You and your cliffhangers.

Dude, deep breaths its all good the plots there you just gotta figure out how you want it to come out. ive found that writing the end first is easiest so i know how i want the story go and how to get there.

I love the story but YOU MUST NOT SUCCOMB TO THE BLOCK OF THE WRITER! No more writer'ms block for you! I just screamed the magic words and made it fly away like one of those demented birds! Muahahah! :)