Wow. That was very well written. I can't wait to see it tie in with the main story.

This was really fun to read! Will Amakirah be appearing in the main story The Wizard and The Lonely Princess eventually? (Her cryptic words mad it sound like it)

this side story is both amazing in the constrution but also in way it's written to me you seam like an amazing writer just by this. I have read the main story and that is also amazing. The one thing I really loved was the way it ended you can just put another side story from this in the future as them meeting as rencarnations or work it in to the main stroy during it or as an aftermath once it is complet. All in all I loved this and keep up the good work.

Nice job, very entertaining!

Cheers!

now THAT explains the chapter where Harry had an egyptian dagger.

Bucking dammit, this was so creepy... o.o

Damn, that scared the crap out of me. I think you just gave Stephen King a run for his money. Quick question, is that going to be a 'part' of the other story or a 'side stander' acting as a similar yet different story?

I must say, this is an amazing story, and I hope to see the Christmas special soon, have happy holidays my fellow author. Oh, and do try to update the main story as well, I can't wait to see more. ;)

This *Gestures angrily at the story* is how you write a horror story.
Observe. Note the lack of gore. Note the chills going down your spine regardless.
The prosecution rests, your honor.

M'kay. This was a good short story, added a good seasonale tone that I needed, and from what I can guess, introduce new elements that will be added to newer chapters of the Wiz and Lonley P.

Read this at 3am.
BIG mistake.

But them I realised…
Sometimes it's fun to be scared.

Great Halloween story. I especially liked how you kept the 'monster's identity ambiguous until the climax, it almost felt like an episode of Doctor Who. I was all but sure that you had pulled a convenient slenderman, but then you mentioned the teeth.

Please update the main story soon!
Also, how long will we have to wait for The events of the episode 1 of mlp?

I think it's fortunate now that this story is occuring in the nineties, otherwise we'd have to deal with the ramifications of Egyptian Gods being used in something so trivial as a childrens card games, which was eventually morphed into card games on motorcycles...

But having stared down the Egyptian God of Death I think Harry and crew will do well against Lord "Flight from Death". Yes he had help here, but he shall help against Voldemort as well, and of greater quantity, with enough being of high quality to more than do their parts.

She was the priests daughter wasn't she

The friend...was she the Egyptian goddess...you know-Osiris' wife?

Because NO ONE can vanish THAT silently!

Ending was predictable which wasn't a bad thing in this case as it wouldn't have been satisfying done any other way.