|Reviews for A Thin Line|
| Twink423 11/9/12 . chapter 3
Love their HEA! :-D
| Twink423 11/8/12 . chapter 2
What a fucking night is right! So so so good!
I love how clueless Bella has been and glad Edward told her how he feels. He really is a sweet guy just trying to get his girl. Glad she's going to stay and they can figure things out. :)
| Twink423 11/8/12 . chapter 1
Love these two! And that they're crossing that line into new territory. ;-)
| Guest 11/7/12 . chapter 3
thanks for sharing:)
| CynMar Rom 11/6/12 . chapter 3
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet! I loved it! *sniff*
| brenda.warren.1257 11/5/12 . chapter 3
that was beautiful it just wasnt long enough but theres alway future take (hope hope)
| brenda.warren.1257 11/5/12 . chapter 2
well it took him a long time to let her know how he feels about her but im confused she loves him too why didnt she tell him so
| HaylesHayles 11/5/12 . chapter 3
Really good short story, as expected :).
| samiam77 11/4/12 . chapter 3
This was great and I loved it! Perfect!
| puasluoma 11/2/12 . chapter 3
Very nice :)
Too much sex tho
| babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 3
Yay, he passed the test!
Shoo I would've told Edward the same thing when GE answered the phone that way. I wonder what the cashier was thinking, listening to the conversation.
| babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 2
Wow... I never thought that Edward would be that insecure under all that anger.
I hope he can be able to trust Bella before the nit trusting breaks them.
| babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Eww, Edward, having Bella service him after being in someone else. So gross.
And ouch to staying away from each other. I loved how Emmett busted them.
| carebear309 11/2/12 . chapter 3
Great finish for these two :)
| Twi-Mom12292005 11/1/12 . chapter 3
This was a very beautiful story, and it was so like looking into someones RL. So i have to ask, are these characters a reflection of someone you know? You write from someone whose had some type of experience with this befor. great job doll, keep up the awesome work.