| Reviews for A Thin Line |
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Twink423 11/9/12 . chapter 3Love their HEA! :-D |
Twink423 11/8/12 . chapter 2What a fucking night is right! So so so good! I love how clueless Bella has been and glad Edward told her how he feels. He really is a sweet guy just trying to get his girl. Glad she's going to stay and they can figure things out. :) |
Twink423 11/8/12 . chapter 1Love these two! And that they're crossing that line into new territory. ;-) |
Guest 11/7/12 . chapter 3 thanks for sharing:) |
CynMar Rom 11/6/12 . chapter 3aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet! I loved it! *sniff* Much love! |
brenda.warren.1257 11/5/12 . chapter 3that was beautiful it just wasnt long enough but theres alway future take (hope hope) |
brenda.warren.1257 11/5/12 . chapter 2well it took him a long time to let her know how he feels about her but im confused she loves him too why didnt she tell him so |
HaylesHayles 11/5/12 . chapter 3Really good short story, as expected :). |
samiam77 11/4/12 . chapter 3This was great and I loved it! Perfect! |
puasluoma 11/2/12 . chapter 3Very nice :) Too much sex tho |
babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 3Yay, he passed the test! Shoo I would've told Edward the same thing when GE answered the phone that way. I wonder what the cashier was thinking, listening to the conversation. |
babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 2Wow... I never thought that Edward would be that insecure under all that anger. I hope he can be able to trust Bella before the nit trusting breaks them. |
babylopez2008 11/2/12 . chapter 1Eww, Edward, having Bella service him after being in someone else. So gross. And ouch to staying away from each other. I loved how Emmett busted them. |
carebear309 11/2/12 . chapter 3Great finish for these two :) |
Twi-Mom12292005 11/1/12 . chapter 3This was a very beautiful story, and it was so like looking into someones RL. So i have to ask, are these characters a reflection of someone you know? You write from someone whose had some type of experience with this befor. great job doll, keep up the awesome work. |