Interesting story. I like it. I cant wait to read more.

PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. . 3333 This is AMAZING.

PLEASE. PLEASE. PLLLEEASSSE CONTINUE THIS. I LOVE IT TOO MUCH.

oh mcgee please dont die

Can't wait until the next chapter 3 This is brilliant.

I LOVE THIS. 3 I hope this will be continued 333

What? Oh, poor Tony! Poor Timmy! POOR EVERYONE!

TIMMY!

Yay! Go Tony! Aw, this is so sweet! I love it!

Okay, that was awesome! The moment you have a character with a freaking PIPE in him and is offering a friend his coat is when you know the show will give him a near- death experience soon. Great job!

Marawanna? Do you mean marijuana, also known as cannabis, an illegal drug that many wish was legal and is primarily taken in through smoking/inhaling?

Sorry for the sarcasm, but you should really do some research.

Great story so far. Hope they are found soon.

Man, that was a great chapter AND story! I love it so much can't wait for you to finish it :) I mean everything fits perfectly! I would suggest team Gibbs to start BOLOS and stuff by what they saw on TV but they would do it behind Vance's back. That's just my idea. For a 16 year old, you write better than my 30 year old brother o.O you're awesome and your story rocks!

Great story! Haven't found one like this in a while!

Powerful! Glad Tony saved Tim's life, very sorry Tony got shot and is in pain and now has had to make a deal with Dirtbag driver. BUT they're still alive, so some hope there.