Don.t understand

Hi! I've read 2 chapters and I'm curious to know the ending) Don't really understand why there's no comments, because i think it's a nice story!

Love the exciting premise. Can't wait to see where you take it. More please. TAG

How about... they're locked up in a facility that captures people (i don't know who) and makes them work for them. Whether it be to 'pleasure them', fix something, create something, I don't know; however, the majority are just left in their cells. And when they've outlived their use, they 'dispose of them'.

Ethan and Justin are obviously about to have that happen to them.

The plan could be that Justin distracts them in some way, giving Ethan the chance to run. Justin gets left behind, but due to Ethan escaping, the men decide to take Justin back to the facility and tell their boss what happened. Thus, Justin's impending death is stalled, meanwhile, Ethan runs to the closest police station and gives them the papers, explaining the situation as best he can.

And... that's all I've got, hope it's of use to you (though it probably isn't).

Anyway, I love this story so far and I can't wait until you update! :D

plz plz plz update... and if possible include what kind of abuse or torture justin has been faced with... update soon, i dont really like waiting :P

please update it could be a great story u r on the right track need help ask thanku kim

Great update loved it!:)
want so bad to no wats up wit justin's kidnap
glad there's no interest (in anyway) with justin and ethan. Hope he byes the pics to someone, THEN is exicuted lyk a dog:) ( nice wording;)) cold justin can be interesting :) (not to cold that brian can't warm him). Can't wait for nxt chapter:D
can't wait for the nxt chapter

omg please dont wait to long to update i'm kinda already addicted

I have no idea whats going on, but I really like it... Justin is a smart little fucker and I love the fact that the cynic Brian is the one who still has hope while everyone else assumes Justin is dead.

don't leave it there tell us what happen to justin update soon kim

Very good beginning for a very promising story. I can't wait for the next update.

Good concept. Just a tip, you always need punctuation inside dialog quotes. A period, a comma, something, even if it's not a question mark it still needs to be there.

Plzzzzzzzz update love the begining very interesting haven't seen it be4 :)
plzz update very soon the site I have been Reading lately ( midnight whispers) is unavialable right now either it's my Internet exploror or it's the site that I can't access but it stopped my heart wheni couldn't get on to it, anyway I really need a good story to keep up wit my obsession and this story seems perfect to keep me sane:)

Good start _

I like it so keep on writing it please :)