This was great - very creepy! I felt myself wanting to yell at her to quit overlooking all of the signs that James is obviously off his rocker.

I really enjoy third person and I like endings tied up fairly tight, though not to the point of tedium. :)

this reminded me a little of the Twilight Zone TV series, where everything looks fine at the start, but by the end they've all gone to hell

I know this is not what you had in mind but I have a few questions,first what the hell was wrong with james? was he the one doing those weird things to her? what happened to Charley? and why the hell did Edward have red eyes? other that the stry was weird but I guess it was meant to be

Probably first person with alternating POVs. Loved this but would like to know a bit more about James, Charlie and what happened to Bella.

I think I'd have to choose the same option as Bella. Damn, James was definitely fucked up!

Ahhhh!
Geez, this ending is so ambiguous. I hope the Cullens didn't hurt Charlie. I'm glad that James has been dispatched. The future could be terrible for Bella or wonderful.

Really awesome!

Love!

This was a lovely little one-shot.

I kinda enjoyed the mystery of it all, but I'll admit I'd love a little more. _

Have a great Halloween!

Thank you for the Halloween treat!

Damn - James was more whacko than usual. Loved it!

In answer to your questions...
1. I don't have a preference, just that it's well written (as your stories are!).
2. I LOVE being left in the dark. There's a fine line between a bit of mystery and making no sense, but I'd prefer to be left thinking about the ending if I could.

Thanks for writing and sharing :)

First or third both work. I'm intrigued, so I want to read more. Thanks for writing.

I liked the third person POV, and I liked the mystery at the end...although I would not be opposed to a sequel. ;)

Happy All-Hallowed Eve!

Cassandra :)
xxxooo

Thank you for sharing this dark tale. James was skin-crawling creepy. Left me with lots of questions!

I enjoyed your story, G&G. Will you continue it? I'm wondering... How did Bella end up out in the woods and naked in James bedroom? Did Edward kidnap her or was James drugging her?

Thanks for sharing.