I really like this story. I think you've captured the sisterly relationship very well. I wish you'd do a follow up.

Love the forshadowing in this and you kept them in perfect character!

Great stuff! Please keep writing more on this story :)

Sweet and lovely, I like this view at a pre-movie Alice. And its also comfortable for me to know that America will change the "second choice" - thing, because she will be Uncasfirst choice...

beautiful story so far, I really love your style. hope youll continue with another story similar to the movie about Alice and Uncas ;))

Very good job! I admire your writing and originality... and of course we know Alice will lose the bet ;) Why don't you continue it? It will be great!