Well done! I hope you write additional stories!

Love this story!

This was fanfreakingtastic! I've always loved that scene in Angry Mourner and you definitely did it justice. Thank you!

Very well done I really enjoyed your story and the interaction between P and D was perfect. I have that episode on DVD so will watch it again with more interest imagining all this going on off camera. EE

Yes, that's who they are and they are perfect together...I loved this. It was short but sweet and had all the right stuff for a Missing Moment...and it definitely did not read like a first fanfic.

Nicely done :)

Thanks for sharing, I don't know this TVshow, but I love P-Dfluff no matter how and where. Great! Give us more...

Very nicely done for a first attempt. No matter how many times she tries to explain, Perry just keeps asking. Besides I don't think he would want it any other way either. They can't seem to escape murder and court room drama, no matter how well Perry tries to plan a vacation. Looking forward to more of these two and their adventiure, even if Paul is around.

It definitely doesn't read like a first effort. You captured all the characters to a T and I loved that Della feels like she's in Perry's arms when she drives his car.

Well done!