Dark, but still made me smile. She's just so DAMN STUBBORN! Sorry, not here, but, y'know...THERE...

K, so this was veeery pretty. Gonna go read some Spike pov's now... ;)

A.M.L.

i love it , it's so like romeo and juliet, star-crossed lovers and all that, a beautiful poem well done.

Wow. This is just-wow. I love poetry and this is excellent. This goes beyond just BtVS poetry, it's just a piece of great writing. Imagery, use of words, everything is really nice. Thanks for sharing!

Oh! That was REALLY GOOD! You're VERY talented! Your words have such a beautiful rythem to them. Keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your fabulous work!

All my love,

Celeny