I like how you used scenes from the actual game, it works for this story. Oh, and I'm not a big fan of Vaan anyway, so you've already got me hooked. XD

I LOVE THAT MOVIE! Penelo is obviously Rapunzel, so is Balthier Flynn Rider? Are you going to make Penelo have long hair? I'm interested in the love triangle between Larsa, Penelo, and Balthier O_o. Please update soon, you're killing me!

This is really good, and I'm really curious to see where you take this. I didn't really get the feeling of Tangled until the very end when you wrote about the tower. Please update soon!