Curiosity killed the cat but, Love brought it back
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Thanx .

Greaatt stooorrrry!
I wish you'd put up more chapters though, i wish i could persuade you to.
So good thing i brought this. *Switches on chainsaw*
Police: Ma'am, dangerous items like that are not allowed in this review.
Me: Oh, c'mon! Not even my BB gun?
Police: Sorry ma'am but we have to follow the correct police protocol.
Me: Okay,*sigh* I understand.(Hides matchet behind back)
Police: ...
Me: *Smile*

This is really good so far.
You might want to make your chapters longer.
But that's just me. )