|Reviews for Soul Silver Stealing|
| Freaky White 1/23/13 . chapter 1
Whoa, I didn't expect Kotone to be bad... But this story's awesome nonetheless
Good job, really! *thumbs up*
Farla, you always write the same, don't you? Why do you ALWAYS complain about how to write the stuff with the speech and so on? -.-' Nobody's perfect, honey. So, calm down and relax, if you know how to...
And again, 0Rust-Dust0, well done!
xoxo Freaky White
| Glaceon1362 11/1/12 . chapter 1
| Farla 10/31/12 . chapter 1
[ than Pokemon battles]
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names or nicknames of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
["Is it? This is a Shrine?" She questioned ]
Dialogue is written as "Hello," she said or "Hello!" she said, never "Hello." She said or "Hello." she said or "Hello," She said or "Hello" she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. In that case it's written as "Hello." She grinned, never "Hello," she grinned or "Hello," She grinned or "Hello." she grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," she said. "This is it." not "Hi," she said, "this is it." or "Hi," she said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," she said, "is it." The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks with thoughts.
Anyway, this really seems like a generic ghost story. You mention Celebi but it doesn't actually matter.