I love your take on Rapture and I can't wait to see if Lucifer manages to win over Luce. Update soon? Thanks :D

I really like what you are writing here, but try to add more feelings and details and write more :) The Idea about Luce and Lucifer is just adorable !:)

i love this chapter please write more and write soon please xxx

Write more please x

Its actually really good.

I love your story how Lucinda chose Lucifer to end Daniel pain in the next chapter you should have Cam interfear and kiss Luce and then Luce is all mixed in the head but anyway I love your story but can't wait for the chapters to be longer
p.s. I am sorry if the last bit sounded mean it wasn't it supposed to.

Arraine

aww but thankas this was soo sad please update soon

Please please update this is reallly good!

This is really interesting; I hope you consider continuing :)

I really like this. Lucinda and Daniel are amazing but for some reason I'm in LOVE with Cam. Update soon.

- EBS -

Uhhhh... isnt Lucifer the bad guy here? Then why are Luce and Lucifer together? Not that I hate the story, but I was wondering, what made you think of this? Anyway, it is a very interesting story, and I kinda like it a bit! And, try to make your chapters longer.

YAY! YOU WROTE IT! 8) :D