Hi :) Congrats on your first fic. This is a good premise and you've made a nice start here. I did find it very short, even for an introductory chapter, and there were a few spelling, grammar and punctuation errors that I thought made it a little difficult to read in places. Perhaps a beta-reader could help? Thank you for writing, and best of luck x

You're in the wrong category, you should be in vocaloid. This cantarella is by You Higuri