Hey. I liked this. It's really good!

Please continue this

Love the first update

Dude if ur not gonna finish this please lett some one adopt it, for me please,
-MB

Please continue I just found this story and would very much appreciate it if you decided to continue
-ㄝㄖ

What!? What happened to him? He used to be like, the most zealous of all the Society!

Typos: The word "a" is randomly in the first sentence. "2" should be written out. In the fourth sentence, I think (not sure) that there should be a comma after "except". In the fifth sentence, it should be "had" and not "have". Also, they "were" trying to convince him, they "are" not. Be sure to stay with one tense, probably past. Second paragraph: Each time a new person speaks, be sure to start a new paragraph. A couple times, you spelled names wrong. And by the way, it's usually the Mysterious Benedict Society. And even chapter titles use capital letters for all important words, as well as the first and last.
This had potential to become a pretty good story. I would suggest you show the other characters as well. And please try to keep Reynie from changing too much. And what is the trouble that there is?