|Reviews for NaNoWriMo: All That I Have|
| Jonas Hultin 5/8/13 . chapter 22
Noooooo! I have caught up with you on this story aswell :'(
You are totally ruining my spare time with these lovely stories ;). After reading "A Blade Reforged" I did not dare to start reading another one of your longer stories because I can't leave the computer when I've began. But a week ago my english-teacher gave us the task to read a book in english (I'm from Sweden) and I went straight to your page, forgot about my normal life for many hours and well, now I'm sad because the story hasn't even been finished. :'( (seriously, I paniced when I noticed that the story wouln't end at chapter 21)
Your stories are some of the best stories I've read (but I don't read that often XD) and I will follow Irelia and Riven no matter how long it will take for you to write the next parts 3.
You are awesome Grand Viper of Grand and you better keep on writing!
10 out of 10 hot swedish blondes! But A Blade Reforged got 11 out of 10 since Riven is my favorite champ
Jonas Hultin of Sweden (mabye related to Olaf)
| AngkorSoldier 5/2/13 . chapter 22
Amazing story! But what the hell is going on with Zelos? Why is he so crazy now?! Cant wait fro your next chapter.
| O.verP.owered 4/22/13 . chapter 22
Recently caught up with the story! Awesome job, your writing has gotten better, if anything!
| Soulnight 4/18/13 . chapter 22
Another great story Viper. I can't wait to see how this ends
| Orange 4/15/13 . chapter 6
Katarinas eyes are green D:
| Ehecatl 4/8/13 . chapter 22
Good fuckity hell, this story is brilliant! You are an incredibly talented writer. Where to even begin...
First, it's always refreshing to see someone with real writing skill on this board. I mean, let's face it. 99 percent of all fan fiction sucks, and that's not just plot-wise. Much of the reason it sucks is because the writer themselves has no real talent and just can't maintain interest through their words alone. Even if the writer can write a sentence that is grammatically correct (which btw that's rare here too), they just don't know how to keep their audience hanging on each sentence, eager to read paragraph after paragraph to see what'll happen next. Many writers are just too young and too simple in their imagery. You actually show that can keep your reader absorbed. You paint a picture with your words that let's us in on what is going on each moment and you subtly give us clues as what's going through the minds of the characters without being too overt. You know how to force your reader not just to read but to think and that takes skill. That is an art a lot of writers (even professional ones) have not mastered. So it's so very refreshing to actually have a writer with so much tradecraft. You have me hooked on every scene, every battle, every line of dialog or inner monologue.
Secondly, I love the portrayal of the characters. I absolutely adore how well rounded and multi-dimensional they all are. Irelia especially is an intriguing character, a woman trying to balance being a soldier, a leader, and a sister and trying to please everyone except herself. She just takes the burden of the whole world on her shoulders with no thought to herself and is completely blind to how this is hurting the people who care about her, not to mention that for as long as she does this, the sword itself is slowly killing her. I just love this story you've made of this woman trying to balance all of these obligations and yet also deep down find something for herself along the way.
Zelos too is, what can I say, completely fascinating. When you first introduce us to this character, I had figured him likeable but not very complex. I hadn't expected him to be anything more than a lost family member to Irelia. But holy shit, for the last 5 or so chapters, I STILL don't know if this guy is brilliant or completely fucking insane. And you've been playing it very well to where we're still trying to figure this guy out. Is he a good brother trying to rescue his sister? Is he a blood-thirsty psycho awake with revelations he can't handle? Has he made use the advice given to him by the others, or have their words only pushed him down a more twisted direction? What the hell actually happened to him out there living stranded for all those years? I just got to say, wow. This character you've brought in is so very interesting, you've exceeded all of my expectations of what you were going to do with him. Well done.
I know I had more to say in praise of you here. Really I can't imagine this is a good review. I'm doing it all from my Blackberry and typically I prefer sitting down and actually making sure my reviews are more structured. I honestly don't know if what I've sent here is anything less than an incoherent mess of rambling and fanboying but I just had to make you aware of another fan you've acquired of your series. I never like letting a good- a truly GOOD- story go without praise for too long and I've honestly done just that with this story. But I really really love what you've got here, and I want you to finish it so I can add it to my collection of other rare and amazing fics. This truly is amazing and I can only hope this review at least flatters you and inspires you to keep writing if nothing else, even if what I've got here is a garbled mess of squeeling and nonsense. Anyway, best of luck to you and I'm looking forward to giving you something more concrete once I pause from hyperventilating for one moment. Thank you so much!
| Tylerst 4/7/13 . chapter 22
If riven is actually dead I am gonna be so mad at you dude.
| Guest 4/7/13 . chapter 22
It seems like the more you reveal, the less I know and the more I go insane wondering... Keep up the great work!
| Guest 4/7/13 . chapter 22
Good story, I really want to know what happened to Riven though?
| Tyber Zahn 4/6/13 . chapter 22
You must love torturing me. So many epic cliffhangers, and yet keeping us in the dark at the same time.
| Blueberry Absinth 3/27/13 . chapter 15
"I swear to every loving god and every friggin' star if you finish that sentence as your final words I am going to double kill you! How that works is beyond me, but I'm so angry now I think can confidently ignore the laws of nature themselves! Keep quiet and save your strength!"
"I think I fell in love with Wukong, I'm going to have chimpettes with him."
"Come on, come on, no need to be so stiff! It's not like someone's dying, right?"
And fucking everything Zelos said this chapter. I love it. I love his character :3 You got me fangirling him _ I'd love too see his degradation too 'that sounded strange' O_O
| Guest 3/25/13 . chapter 21
I went from getting torn apart in a placement match to having Riven die. that evening just kept going downhill.
In all seriousness though, you always give just enough information s know what's going on, but not enough to figure out where it's going. Which is a good thing.
Although this is more my person opinion, it's been a fairly depressing story the last few chapters. But your writing level just keeps getting better and better, and for that I'm impressed.
| Stolenwarpig 3/24/13 . chapter 21
Neeed more! Simply put it is amazing, I can tell that you really enjoy writing because the sheer amount of thought and detail in this is astounding so much to the point that it feels like it belongs in lore. Next chapter stat!
| Kyuusai20 2/19/13 . chapter 20
Aaaaaaah no I need more T_T Seriously you have such an amazing ability to suck readers into your work. This is incredible. And might I say. Your blade reforged story was just as captivating. I seriously cannot wait for more chapters on the second story.
Also I never thought I'd be so intrigued by some of these character. Lee sin Udyr even Irelia was at most just and interesting league character. But since reading your stories. I have not been able to stop playing Riven and Irelia. They are now my two favorite characters. And frick you make Udyr and Lee sin just amazing. One is the kindest person you'll ever meet and has such amazing wisdom while the other has an incredible way of getting a message across despite his rough manner. There have been so many moments in your stories that literally brought me to tears. You are an incredible writer. And for the record. Riot should be publishing this stuff _ I only hope my own stories can match this quality one day. The only complaint i have is that I must wait to read more. lol but I know the wait will be worth it.
Anyways Im rambling I just wanted to say, keep up the good work and I earnestly look forward to reading more from you. Thank you so much for writing these stories and taking the characters seriously unlike most fanfic writers. You stay true to the characters personality which to me is so important. So again thank you.
| The Rev. T-Dog 2/14/13 . chapter 20
This story is brilliant. I am Digging it. I am Digging it. I am Digging it.
Keep kick ass man. AND FOR FUCKS SAKE KEEP WRITING.