Reviews for NEW MEMBER
Hg 1/6/13 . chapter 1
Hmmm
nice story
ff pr kisi aur ki story pdhne aai thi aur mil hg ki gyi..wink
Guest 11/14/12 . chapter 1
Daya shadi kab karega and abhijeet ko karne de ga i am waiting abhirika real marriage when i saw the episode raaz lapta kidney ka as preet and meet
143CID-AbhiTarika 11/4/12 . chapter 1
lol very sweet and enjoyable :)
Guest 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Nice start.. u r going to continue itt or not.. if u want to continue itt then go ahead.. Its Really nice
foreverknights28 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Welcome to the FF. & congrats on your first story.
Abhijeet pulling Daya's leg nice,enjoyed duo moment. entry of mishti is also good.
all the best for future projects.
DewDrop29 11/3/12 . chapter 1
Welcm on ff & ur story is awsome keep writing:)
Kotha love Abhirika 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Sooooooooo nice continua It.
DF - Daya's girl 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Very Nice story yaar

Being your first attempt... its too good...

I watched CID for DUO and U write a story on them... thanks for it
Guest 11/2/12 . chapter 1
klove-dCID-
oh I missed some words too...hehe...but U came out very well... nd all the best for ur next story...
Guest 11/2/12 . chapter 1
nic story...
gr8 atmpt...keep it up...
bt 1 thng is missng in ur story...& its tarika...
anyways it ws good...all th bst 4 ur nxt updt...
thanxxxxxxxxxxxx...
kdlove-uall 11/2/12 . chapter 1
welcome to ff dear..ur story is very gud nd idea is different.I like it...some words were missing...but chalta hai boss...its ur first story nd u came out very the best for next...