| Reviews for A Battle at the Ball |
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Guest 11/16/12 . chapter 3 Mac just needs to kick her a** and get it over with. Please tell me that you aren't going to let Harm actually DO anything with this skanky ho? ::shudders:: I'd like to see Krennick lose EVERYTHING her marriage, her career, the respect of her peers... if she just HAPPENS to wind up in jail or dead, that'd be a bonus! Can't wait for more. |
Guest 11/14/12 . chapter 3 Mac just needs to kick her ass and get it over with. Please tell me that you aren't going to let Harm actually DO anything with this skanky ho? ::shudders:: I'd like to see Krennick lose EVERYTHING her marriage, her career, the respect of her peers... if she just HAPPENS to wind up in jail or dead, that'd be a bonus! Can't wait for more. |
Saissa 11/9/12 . chapter 3I guess Krennick will find out - if she makes a move on Harm - she will find out for sure just how far Mac will go to protect her family. Mac did give her the rules - and if Krennick chooses not to accept them, then she must accept the consequences. Bring it on, Krennick - I cant wait to read what happens next! |
j 11/7/12 . chapter 3 getting interesting. what will she do next? if she goes after mac how will harm react? |
robertwnielsen 11/7/12 . chapter 3Well, I think Krennick's ego is definitely going to get the best of her. Like I said before, "LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLET'S GET RRRRRRRRRRRRRRREADY TO RRRRRRRRRRUMBLEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !" This is DEFINITELY going to get ugly...(between Mac and Krennick...and maybe Harm, too.) Looking forward to the continuation! :) Robert |
Michi uk 11/6/12 . chapter 3Can't wait to get the continuance of this Krennick eoisode. |
Michi uk 11/6/12 . chapter 2Glad Mac stood up to Krennick |
Michi uk 11/6/12 . chapter 1Can't wait for next chapter. |
rlrct 11/6/12 . chapter 3Nicely written and well-setup for a series of chapters that could get really entertaining, not to mention a "claws out" battle! |
rlrct 11/5/12 . chapter 2Nice little story. You could really have some fun with Krennick deciding to go after Mac only to find out what it's like to go up against a marine. |
jpstar57 11/5/12 . chapter 2Very nice. Can't wait to see how Krennick really reacts and how this whole mess, that you've written so well, is resolved. |
Saissa 11/4/12 . chapter 2So I assume the 3rd POV is Krennicks? Cant wait to read it. I bet she is PISSED! |
robertwnielsen 11/4/12 . chapter 2Why am I not surprised about Harm being paranoid? :) I mean, he's as protective of their (his and Mac's) careers as he is of Mac...so his attitude about Mac confronting Krennick doesn't shock me at all. Great job, and definitely looking forward to Chap. 3, to see where this goes from here! :) Robert |
jrfanfrommo 11/4/12 . chapter 2Oh boy Harm needs to have a little more faith in Mac's come to Jesus meeting with Krennick...also are we gonna see a story about Harm's "issues" with the JAG & SECNAV? Is Krennick gonna be the last POV? post soon please! Love your stories |
Liz 11/3/12 . chapter 1 Love the "POWER" of women with a cause. Good work looking forward to more of this dinner. |