| Reviews for When Steele Worlds Collide |
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leiasky 1/23/13 . chapter 1Ahh, I wasn't logged in with the previous comment. Would love to see a continuation of this someday. |
Guest 1/23/13 . chapter 1 Wow. Nicely done! I'd love to see a companion piece to this sometime. His thoughts when the choice was finally made - or made for him... |
eaz35173 11/2/12 . chapter 1This was wonderful! I love how you are able to get into Steele's head and give us flashes of insight into the "in-between" moments of the episodes! Love this... "Oh, he was known to indulge in the occasional glass of champagne – more for the spectacle than the taste … the pop of the cork, the fizz of the golden liquid filling a delicate flute, the sight of warm brown eyes looking back at him over the rim of a coupe." I also liked how you framed their kissing - that he decided that it was something to look forward to, not a preliminary activity to the main event. It certainly goes a long way to explain why he waited for her. |