Reviews for Getting together At last
marye904 11/17/12 . chapter 5
yes continue.
Michi uk 11/17/12 . chapter 5
Enjoyed this story,So Harm and Mac became parents of a baby girl called Ziva, now they can go home as a complete family. Loved it.!
jjgeraghty 11/10/12 . chapter 4
Love the story can't wait to read more!
marye904 11/9/12 . chapter 4
I'm liking this. :-)
marye904 11/9/12 . chapter 3
At least Mac is there for him.
marye904 11/9/12 . chapter 2
Hope that dream doesn't come true.
marye904 11/9/12 . chapter 1
good start
Guest 11/7/12 . chapter 3
Seriously, stop writing. I didn't even have to read this to know it was full of spelling and grammar mistakes. Either learn to write or stop it altogether.
Liz 11/5/12 . chapter 2
Everyone needs closure and if they do not get it then they spend their life with regrets. Frank and Harm need TIME to be the father he has known and Harm needs time with Mac and see how much she has loved him and they need that time for a family since it just the four of them so far. Looking forward to reading your writings but lets not get morbid and give them a chance at family.
Guest 11/5/12 . chapter 2
This is pure crap. You can't spell, have no grasp on grammar, and your storyline is horrible. Do everyone a favor and stop writing now. No one wants any more chapters.
Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 2
I can't wait for the next capter.
Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 2
This is a good story, but you need a beta reader. There are too many errors.
Guest 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Looking forward to more.
Thanks
Wiggle34 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Do you know I would love to read more of this, Well I would really like you to write more about what happens with Frank their trip there and back. this is such a lovely piece of writing
jag389 11/2/12 . chapter 1
A little short, but a good start.
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