| Reviews for A Day In The Life |
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BorisCheshireCat 6/11/13 . chapter 1That would be the coolest thing ever; living with them sounds awesome. |
Amy 5/16/13 . chapter 43 This is a nice story, but I do think it drags on a bit. It is starting to pick up a little with the trip, though. A cliffhanger at the end of a chapter would be nice. Maybe even the reappearance of Madison's ex. Just something to make it a little more exciting and makes me want to keep reading it. Not just them saying how much they love each other, or how lucky they are to have such a handsome/beautiful boyfriend/girlfriend. I also think that maybe you should include more of the other characters, and not just have them talking about the relationship of Paul and Madison. It is overall a good story. It just needs something more. Something that I would have expected for something that already has 43 parts. |
Mrandmrsgharrison 5/1/13 . chapter 41Awwww! Thats soooo cute :3 please keep updating! I wanna know if they go to austria!? - Mrs g |
Kendal 4/28/13 . chapter 40 I LOVE this story! I think it would be ten times better if you ended with a good cliff hanger at the end of a chapter:) |
Mrandmrsgharrison 4/25/13 . chapter 40Aww, that was so cute :) I really do think paul is so sweet in this story! And fave line if the chappy: 'We're weird, but we're weird together.' I thought it sweet but at tge same time it made me giggle! :) please keep updating :) - Mrs g |
Mrandmrsgharrison 4/18/13 . chapter 39Awwwww gotta love paul and mads! :3 keep the epic updates comin'! |
JamesWinstonParkinHarrisonLOVE 4/6/13 . chapter 37cuuuuuuuuuute |
JamesWinstonParkinHarrisonLOVE 4/6/13 . chapter 34pooooooooooooooooor Thing...s |
Mrandmrsgharrison 4/4/13 . chapter 37Awwww, thats soooo cute! Love this chappy :) keep 'em coming! |
JamesWinstonParkinHarrisonLOVE 3/9/13 . chapter 32Lovely home! :) |
Meghan 2/28/13 . chapter 31 .Ever |
Meghan Harrison 2/28/13 . chapter 11 Love it! |
JamesWinstonParkinHarrisonLOVE 2/28/13 . chapter 31good as ever :) |
FlowerChild17 2/28/13 . chapter 1Madison's character is a little flat, I think you need to give her more depth. Other than that, I think this might turn into a good story. Also please for the love of god capitalize the i's, they are really bugging me. |
Guest 2/15/13 . chapter 29 I still love this story! |