Kewl chappie. Kewl fic overall! I like the use of new characters in this fic to explain events not mentioned very often in the actual series. This is a very creative story- I don't know why more people don't review- it's awesome! I now have you on my favorites list and story alert list- update soon!

Common...you know you want to...! _

Melchan_

oh this a good story! is there going to be more or is it done?/ i know that's probably stupid to ask but i never know. lol!

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Wow. That was a VERY intense chapter. Wonderful job! I was sitting on the edge of my chair throughout the entire battle scene!

Facinating story you have here - well detailed and plausable. I am assuming at this point that 'Doc' was so upset because Duo resembled her dead husband and that Duo is in fact her son.

Would love to read more, so hope you post soon _

Hey, nice beginning. I like the note it starts on, and your writing style is pretty solid. It's a pleasure to read - not a chore, as so many GW fics are. Is Hannah Heero's mum? I can't wait for the next chapters of this fic.

I gone over both chapters

and I love it. I can't wait

for the next chapter.