Nice Chapter. I like the banter the Pokemon exchanged with each other. I'll keep reading.

awsome i might cry by the way im new to the website,so how do you right stories on here?

this is great.i love pokemon and spirited away and so far this is a great crossover of the two.

That was a pretty nice chapter. Also Pokemon can talk in the Spirit world? That was a surprise. Actually in my story the same thing happens is that were you got the idea? If you did that's okay. I'm going to continue reading.

This is a pretty interesting first chapter. I think I'll continue reading.

This is getting mysterious...

Let's see...I think the boy is N. I'm pretty sure of it. Anyway, this is a really good story-I've never seem Spirited Away, but you make it easy to understand without having seen the movie. Also, this almost seems like something that could happen because of a Pokemon causing it (Giratina or Darkrai maybe). If this wouldn't work because of the movie, then just ignore that, I have no idea where the plot is supposed to go from here. Well, that's all! Great story! :)