|Reviews for Time for a Break|
| The Wumbologist 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Ah! I'm glad someone wrote something for Makoto; she's right up there as one of my favorite characters from DS2. In fact, I believe this is the first fic on this website about Makoto (that isn't about her dying o_o) so I really do want to thank you for writing it.
As for the content of your story itself, I think you've done a fine job of writing it. The plot is short and simple which is perfect for a story of this length. You've also done a great job of writing the characters; I think everyone is completely in character here, especially Yamato. I also like how you've portrayed Hiro: bright and reliable yet still prone to mistakes as he is new to the whole demon-fighting business.
Overall you have a great narrative, awesome characterization and a nice and tidy plot with which to focus on Makoto. Great job with this, I really enjoyed it!