Great story! Please update soon. I can't wait to see who saved Lightning!

- Goddess Lightning

Great story so far! Looking forward to the next chapter even though I only read ff13 hopexlight fics normally this one seems really good with potential.

Katie x

Your writings are very good. I'm just new to this site but already I have spent 3 hours reading your works. I'm also a fan of ff13 so it's pretty fun to read other people's work. Good job also on World's Collide. Keep up the stories!

Yes, Lightning is back! Makes sense that Hope finds her first since they hint that he helps Light in the next game. So far the story is starting out well for me, and the music you recommended helped create the mood too. Looking forward to updates!

Nicely written, I've never seen a fanfic for a announced game that hasn't been released yet!
Hmmm, this is just a small detail that probably isn't important, but anyways, Lightning has her old outfit back.

this follows up the plot pretty well...and yes, you nailed Light and Hopes interaction just the way it should be...although u have said that this isnt a Hope x Light fic, it wouldnt hurt to add a few hints here and there to recruit the HopexLight fanbase as your audience XD

yeah i'm not feeling the romance here... best to keep it out and keep on doing what your doing. hurry update! are they goign to fall upon the last vestiges of humans civilization?

Arrgh, evil cliffhanger! But, great start to a very interesting story. I look forward to your next installment :D Thank you so much for posting and sharing.

ah shucks! in my heart its between hope and cid raines damit... common hope you can do it!