Holy crap, I can't get over how great that ending was.
The plot twist with Ice (scaredy-skitty Omfg I just about died. I was laughing so hard my family started giving me funny looks) was really unexpected; and the ultimate ending was just awesome!
Great job on the story, and congrats on finishing! :D

Great ending chapter to a great story.

Yay! Great story! I liked reading it, keep it up!

I still think Ambs is hilarious!

I absolutely love the story thank you. I especialy love how damien has that childish side. If i had to chose who my favorite evil team member from all the pokemon games i would have to chose ice who would be up in the top five along with N.

LOL word: Ambs! HAHAHA

Omg! I LOVE the story please write more and please make it soon! I especialy love Amber and her determination.

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Fenn, Fennekin, Fen! ( awesome chapter im turned into a Fennekin by accidently lapping up a potion in water from stupid scientist )

I laughed because Amber used the big 'F' word in front of her young son.

I'm SOOOOO sorry for the Kate comment I was out of town and I'm addicted to legend of Zelda twilight princess on my new wii! Anyway awesome chapter update soon bye! ( goes to play in the wii )

DUN DUN DUN! (Sorry!)

Umbreon,umbre, umbreon :3

Oh man, it has been TOO long since I last checked up on this story. I almost forgot how much I enjoy it, but these last chapters were amazing! The world just seems to have it cut out for Amber and Damien, but at the same time their exploits always make for a great story!

Keep up the great work! 8D

:3 I'm lol

Hmm so many ways this storye can go its impossible to predict